John Webmaster
Posts : 321 Mettle : 385 Join date : 2009-08-13 Age : 28 Location : Shippensburg, PA, USA
| Subject: just last night Tue Aug 25, 2009 3:42 pm | |
| heres a poem i wrote when i was like 6:
i couldnt fall asleep last night because the moon was much too bright and while i was still wide awake i cooked myself a juicy steak and when i was done with my steak i thought id jump into a lake i swam in the lake for about an hour and then i got a superpower the power to fly fast and high so high that i was in the sky and then i had to save the town and they gave me a golden crown it all gave me quite a fright and it all happened just last night | |
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Neo The One
Posts : 386 Mettle : 541 Join date : 2009-08-16 Age : 32 Location : Sunny Florida
| Subject: Re: just last night Tue Aug 25, 2009 4:04 pm | |
| Huh. That has a very unique aspect. The childish theme is made beautiful by such a simple poem.
Bravo. | |
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Zoltar Administrator
Posts : 154 Mettle : 197 Join date : 2009-08-14 Age : 29 Location : ......
| Subject: Re: just last night Tue Aug 25, 2009 7:59 pm | |
| Dear god it's to good for words.( no sarcasm intended...ok maybe just a little) | |
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John Webmaster
Posts : 321 Mettle : 385 Join date : 2009-08-13 Age : 28 Location : Shippensburg, PA, USA
| Subject: Re: just last night Thu Aug 27, 2009 1:40 pm | |
| i wrote it one morning when i was 6 and i was half asleep. | |
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Neo The One
Posts : 386 Mettle : 541 Join date : 2009-08-16 Age : 32 Location : Sunny Florida
| Subject: Re: just last night Fri Aug 28, 2009 5:38 pm | |
| Sometimes youth produces the best literature. | |
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